Language has a cadence and rhythm that can draw in the reader or put the reader off. Think about the pieces of writing that are compelling, that stay with us: Martin Luther King Jr's "I Have a Dream" speech which uses repetition as a backbeat to underscore the importance of the words. Hamlet's Soliloquy that features words with and up and down cadence that is mimics his indecisive state. Or Lewis Carroll's Walrus & The Carpenter, that has a jaunty lilt to the language that enhances the frivolity and oddity of the topic.
I'd like you to write the essence of you pieces as a two stanza poem, or sonnet, or limerick or haiku as a way of extending and reaching your use of language.
Here is an example:
In my house, Bread Beloved
Was my brother's greatest joy
Golden brown and highly leavened
Father's treat for a little boy
Who savored his slices and saved a cake
One day behind his bed
Until the odor was too great to take
Alas the loaf was dead
Now YOU try.
I met my true love years ago.
ReplyDeleteBut it was not perfect you know.
Golden fried or swimming in butter,
he made my heart all a flutter.
We're still together, him and me
But we both look quite differently.
He's steamed and tossed in salad greens,
and I am wearing skinny jeans.